麻烦帮修改篇英语作文University is a place where can acquire knowledge ,but I have found some serious problems in campusFirstly,the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher’s teaching and other students’ learning.Do not for

麻烦帮修改篇英语作文University is a place where can acquire knowledge ,but I have found some serious problems in campusFirstly,the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher’s teaching and other students’ learning.Do not for
麻烦帮修改篇英语作文
University is a place where can acquire knowledge ,but I have found some serious problems in campus
Firstly,the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher’s teaching and other students’ learning.Do not forget,you can tune the phone into silent and vibration.
Secondly,Some students drop the litter everywhere,that makes our school not beautiful.Please do not let garbage homeless.We need a beautiful campus.
Finally,Late,leave early,truancy phenomenon is very serious.And the lovers in public occasions over intimate.

麻烦帮修改篇英语作文University is a place where can acquire knowledge ,but I have found some serious problems in campusFirstly,the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher’s teaching and other students’ learning.Do not for
University is a place where we can acquire knowledge,but I have found some serious problems in campus
Firstly,the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher’s teaching and other students’ learning.Do not forget,you can tune the phone into silent and vibration.
Secondly,Some students drop the litter everywhere,which makes our school not beautiful.Please do not let garbage homeless.We need a beautiful campus.
Finally,being Late for class or leaving early,and truancy phenomenon are very serious.And the lovers in public occasions are over intimate.
语法错误我纠正了,整篇文章有点不太连贯.我只能帮你到这个儿了.

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University is a place where
can acquire knowledge , but I have found some serious problems in campus
Firstly, the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher's teaching

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1.1
University is a place where
can acquire knowledge , but I have found some serious problems in campus
Firstly, the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher's teaching
and other students' learning.
[教师点评]
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] some serious problems in campus
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 acquire...knowledge
在教材中出现过 90 次
SeeAlso: gain knowledge166,take knowledge78,get knowledge76,develop knowledge43,produce knowledge22,assume knowledge21,win knowledge4,grow knowledge4,learn knowledge3
[学习提示] 易混词汇: bother, disturb,
trouble, annoy, irritate, vex 均有“使人不安或烦恼”之意。
bother:
指使人烦恼而引起的紧张不安或感到不耐烦。
disturb:
较正式用词，多用被动态。指拢乱，使人不能平静或妨碍别人工作、思维或正常秩序，是程度较深的烦恼。
trouble:
指给人在行动上带来不便或在身心上造成痛苦。
annoy:
强调因被迫忍受令人不快、讨厌的事而失去平静或耐心，多指一时的打拢或恼怒。
irritate:
语气比annoy强得多，指激怒，使发怒，多指一种短时间的反应。
vex: 侧重指因不断的干扰而引起的烦恼，有时含激怒的意味。
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Do not forget, you can tune
the phone into silent and vibration.
[教师点评]
[低频警示] tune...phone 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: forget, omit,
neglect, overlook, disregard, ignore 均有“疏忽，忽略，忘记”之意。
forget:
普通用词，侧重某事不重要或太复杂而未能记住，也指有意疏忽或忘掉。
omit:
指有意或无意地忘记做某事，也指删去被视作不重要、不合意的东西。
neglect:
侧重指有意的忽略或忽视，也可指粗心与疏忽。
overlook:
指因匆忙而疏忽或视而不见。
disregard:
多指有意或自觉地不顾某事。
ignore:
通常指有意不顾，或不理显而易见的事物。
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Secondly, Some students
drop the litter everywhere, that makes our school not beautiful.
[教师点评]
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...school 在教材中出现过
101 次
SeeAlso: do
school70,cause school8
[学习提示] 易混词汇: beautiful, fair,
handsome, lovely, pretty, fine 均含“美丽的，漂亮的”之意。
beautiful:
普通用词，含义广泛，语气最强，指优美和谐，是一种几乎接近完美的美。指人时通常形容女人或小孩，很少用于描写男子。
fair:
正式用词，多用于文学中，形容女子和儿童，侧重外表的美。
handsome:
多用于描写男性的英俊潇洒。有时也形容女人，指其五官端正，体态秀丽。
lovely:
普通用词，描写人时，主要指女人和小孩的相貌，语气不如beautiful强。
pretty:
普通用词，语气比beautiful弱，多用于描写妇女、儿童以及小巧玲珑，精美可爱之物。
fine:
指在容貌、身材或风度等方面令人感到可爱。用于事物时，强调形式或内容的优美。
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Please do not let garbage
homeless.
[教师点评]
[低频警示] let...homeless 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] garbage homeless 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: waste, garbage,
rubbish, litter, debris, junk 均含“废物，垃圾”之意。
waste:
普通用词，概念广泛，指任何被丢弃的东西。
garbage:
主要指有机废料，包括厨房的剩菜剩饭或不能再用的食物。也可作引申用。
rubbish:
普通用词，指任何成堆的、破损的、用过的或无用的东西，尤指弃掉的垃圾堆。也可作引申用。
litter:
是四下乱丢物品的总称，尤指散落于地，有碍观瞻的废物。
debris:
着重指分解、分裂或破坏后剩下的碎片，也指零散的普通废品。
junk:
指回收的旧汽车或大型机器，也指毫无实用价值，或破烂物体，但不指垃圾。
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We need a beautiful
campus.
[教师点评]
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 need...campus 在教材中出现过
5 次
SeeAlso: take campus27,want campus6
[学习提示] 易混词汇: beautiful, fair,
handsome, lovely, pretty, fine 均含“美丽的，漂亮的”之意。
beautiful:
普通用词，含义广泛，语气最强，指优美和谐，是一种几乎接近完美的美。指人时通常形容女人或小孩，很少用于描写男子。
fair:
正式用词，多用于文学中，形容女子和儿童，侧重外表的美。
handsome:
多用于描写男性的英俊潇洒。有时也形容女人，指其五官端正，体态秀丽。
lovely:
普通用词，描写人时，主要指女人和小孩的相貌，语气不如beautiful强。
pretty:
普通用词，语气比beautiful弱，多用于描写妇女、儿童以及小巧玲珑，精美可爱之物。
fine:
指在容貌、身材或风度等方面令人感到可爱。用于事物时，强调形式或内容的优美。
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Finally, Late, leave early,
truancy phenomenon is very serious.
[教师点评]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: at last, at length,
eventually, finally, in the end, lastly 均含有“最后，终于”之意。
at
last: 多指经主观努力，克服各种困难后才终于达到目的。
at length:
强调经历一段长时间后终于完成，侧重在时间部分。
eventually:
侧重于动作或行为的结果。
finally:
常与at last换用，都可用于对往事的描述，但finally不带感情色彩，指一系列事情的最后结局。
in the end: 与at
last同义，但in the end不仅可指“过去”还可表示对“未来”的预计。
lastly:
指连续顺序的最后，通常用在列举事情的场合。
[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely,
exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。
Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely
difficult to manipulate.
如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the
woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.
一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkably
diverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.
他是那么见多识广，极了不起。
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And the lovers in public
occasions over intimate
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 句子不完整
[低频警示] the lovers in public
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: familiar, intimate,
close, confidential 均含“亲密的”之意。
familiar:
通常指因长期交往而彼此很熟悉，像自家人一样。
intimate:
语气强烈，指感情或思想融洽、相互知心，彼此关系亲密。
close:
语气较强，指兴趣爱好相同，因而关系密切，感情深笃。
confidential:
指相互之间可推心置腹、彼此信赖。
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The university is a wonderful place, can obtain a lot of interesting knowledge,but I found in the university campus there are some serious problems.
First of all, mobile phone ringtones often dist...

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The university is a wonderful place, can obtain a lot of interesting knowledge,but I found in the university campus there are some serious problems.
First of all, mobile phone ringtones often disturb the teachers' teaching and students' learning. Don't forget, you can put the mobile phone ringer mutephone or vibration mode.
Secondly, the campus garbage everywhere, which makes our school is not beautiful. Please do not let garbage homeless, we need a beautiful campus.
Finally, late, leave early, truancy phenomenon is very serious. In public the intimate lover.

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