作业帮修改初中英语作文I Expect My School Life (题目有开头)I hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers.And I expect there is a dinning room in my new school ,I will go there to eat some nice and health food with my new
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修改初中英语作文I Expect My School Life (题目有开头)I hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers.And I expect there is a dinning room in my new school ,I will go there to eat some nice and health food with my new
修改初中英语作文
I Expect My School Life (题目有开头)
I hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers.And I expect there is a dinning room in my new school ,I will go there to eat some nice and health food with my new friends.I hope (就是有个运动场,该怎样表达...),because I like doing some sports .Such as playing basketball,playing tennis.I expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers .and we will make progress on our study .I hope these will come ture
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修改初中英语作文I Expect My School Life (题目有开头)I hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers.And I expect there is a dinning room in my new school ,I will go there to eat some nice and health food with my new
some nice and healthy food 不是health
I hope to have a playground
可以把and my teachers 去掉 因为后面的we 指的是我和我的同学们 显得主语不明确
on our studies
写的挺好的啊 句式可以再多样一点 want to...wish to do...would like to do...也可以写一些比较的句子比如说 prefer to do...rather than do...
prefer doing rather than do...would rather do than do...
这样使文章看上去更美观
这是我的一些个人看法