Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I

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Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I

Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I
Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误
写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:
Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I knew my teeth have decayed before one year ago.But I am afraid to see dentist,so I delayed to see the doctor until now.
I took a bus then transfer the subway line 4 to go to the hospital.After registered,I saw the dentist,but she just made an appointment for me to remedy my teeth next time.

Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.求指点语法错误写了一段日记,求指点语法错误:Today ,I went to the Shanghai Ninth People's hospital to see the dentist.Because i have several cavities.Actually,I
I knew my teeth have decayed before one year ago.- I know my teeth have been decayed for more than a year.感觉蛀牙是不是被动语态?然后完成时后面不跟before
But I am afraid to see dentist,so I delayed to see the doctor until now-你已经去看了牙医了,就应该是I was so afraid to see the dentist that I didn't go to see any until now.比较好
transfer-改成 change to 比较好吧?而且感觉外国说地铁几号线,几号应该在前面,line4 subway.
After registered-after registration就可以了.
然后后面可以这样写,I did see the doctor,but she didn't do anything to my teeth but made an appointment for next time treatment.我的确见到了牙医,但是她什么也没做,只是预约了下次的就诊日期.
你结尾可以说,如果知道要预约,我早就去了,什么的.