英语语法不规范,怎么改?What is reason why more and more teenage,especially the ones from the economically city,stay at home rather than live out of the door?

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英语语法不规范,怎么改?What is reason why more and more teenage,especially the ones from the economically city,stay at home rather than live out of the door?

英语语法不规范,怎么改?What is reason why more and more teenage,especially the ones from the economically city,stay at home rather than live out of the door?
英语语法不规范,怎么改?
What is reason why more and more teenage,especially the ones from the economically city,stay at home rather than live out of the door?

英语语法不规范,怎么改?What is reason why more and more teenage,especially the ones from the economically city,stay at home rather than live out of the door?
实在太多了.我等等帮你改改吧
What is the reason that more and more teenagers,especially the people who come from cities,they would rather stay at home than go outside.
首先前面用了What,后面的why就要改为that,否则就成了:为什么.的原因是.这就相当于病句,重复了.
其次,teenage做名词时表:青少年时期,青少年应该是:teenagers,因为不止一个年轻人,所以用复数形式.
再次,the ones 貌似没有这个说法,至少我学了十年的英语都没见过,应该是:the people.
还有,from前面要who,然后from的搭配要么是come from,要么是be from
最后,宁愿做什么,也不愿做什么,用:would rather do than do.

from前面加个who

What is the reason that getting more and more teenagers, especially those from the cities, rather staying at home than having some outdoor activities.
是什么原因越来越多的青少年,尤其是那些来自城市,宁可留在家里也不进行一些户外活动?