英语小作文（纠正语法错误）My familyI have a happy family.There is three people in my family.They’re my mother,my father and me.My mother is thirty eight years old,my farher is thirty eight old,too.I’m eleven years old.I am a studen ,

英语小作文（纠正语法错误）My familyI have a happy family.There is three people in my family.They’re my mother,my father and me.My mother is thirty eight years old,my farher is thirty eight old,too.I’m eleven years old.I am a studen ,
英语小作文（纠正语法错误）
My family
I have a happy family.There is three people in my family.They’re my mother,my father and me.
My mother is thirty eight years old,my farher is thirty eight old,too.I’m eleven years old.I am a studen ,I like reading books.My mother is a teacher,she likes watching TV.My father is a doctor,he likes playing computer.
I’m sure that I am a lucky dog.Because I have a happy family.（最后我想说：“我爱我家的每一个人”应该怎么说?）
这篇英语小作文中有什么语法错误、单词拼写错误、语句不通顺的地方请纠正,顺便回答一下末尾的问题.请给出详细回答.

英语小作文（纠正语法错误）My familyI have a happy family.There is three people in my family.They’re my mother,my father and me.My mother is thirty eight years old,my farher is thirty eight old,too.I’m eleven years old.I am a studen ,
错误之处:
1There is -> There are (后面是复数)
2 me -> I (应该用主格)
3 thirty eight -> thirty-eight (不能分开)
4 拼错:farher -> father
5 拼错:studen -> student
6 she likes和 he likes前面都应加and,或是分别把这两个第一个字母变成大写,成为一句话.(英文中有完整的主谓宾可以构成一句话)
最后一句话的翻译:
I love everybody in my family!

There are three people
my mother,my father and i
my father is thirty eight years old,too
I'm a student(拼错了)
最后 i love everyone of my family

这是修改后的
My family
I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.They’re my mother,my father and me.
My mother is thirty eight years old.My farher is thirty eight ,too....

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这是修改后的
My family
I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.They’re my mother,my father and me.
My mother is thirty eight years old.My farher is thirty eight ,too.I’m eleven years old.I am a student .I like reading books.My mother is a teacher.she likes watching TV.My father is a doctor.He likes playing computer.
I’m sure that I am a lucky dog.Because I have a happy family.I love every member of my family.

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