请英文好的进来帮挑挑错下面是我的英文简历,不知道写的有没有错误,请英文好的帮忙看下,谢谢majors:Analog Electronic Technology 、Digital Electronic Technology、Automatic Control Theory、Modern Control Theory、Mi

请英文好的进来帮挑挑错下面是我的英文简历,不知道写的有没有错误,请英文好的帮忙看下,谢谢majors:Analog Electronic Technology 、Digital Electronic Technology、Automatic Control Theory、Modern Control Theory、Mi
请英文好的进来帮挑挑错
下面是我的英文简历,不知道写的有没有错误,请英文好的帮忙看下,谢谢
majors:Analog Electronic Technology 、Digital Electronic Technology、Automatic Control Theory、Modern Control Theory、Microcomputer Principle and Interface Technology 、Electric Drag、Detection Technology、Signals and Systems、Power Electronics、Theory and Application of SCM、Process Control Engineering、Automation Instrumentation、Modern Electrical Control（Programmable logical controller）
practice and experience:I have took part in the Metalworking Practice
In the Electronic Science and Technology Lab I welded circuit with three other classmates to make a system of intelligent traffic lights during the summer vacation in 2006
During the second semester of 2007,I practice myself as a private teacher,and my major is mathematics and physics.
capacity:Be able to master the language C and assembly language programming
Have a certain understanding of personal computer,including the structure and the use of PC.
Be able to use Multisim, matlab, such circuit simulation software
Characteristics:My hobbies are basketball,handwriting and so on. Honest, optimistic, and have a strong adaptability and self-learning ability
回复一楼：是不是太简单了啊

请英文好的进来帮挑挑错下面是我的英文简历,不知道写的有没有错误,请英文好的帮忙看下,谢谢majors:Analog Electronic Technology 、Digital Electronic Technology、Automatic Control Theory、Modern Control Theory、Mi
1,major 是指你的专业,我觉得你想说的应该是你学过的课程,用subjects吧.
2,In the Electronic Science and Technology Lab I welded circuit with three other classmates to make a system of intelligent traffic lights during the summer vacation in 2006
我给你改的是I worked as a group member in the controlling system of intelligent traffic light in the summer vacation of 2006.
3,During the second semester of 2007,I practice myself as a private teacher,and my major is mathematics and physics.
我给你改的是,I worked as a tutor teaching mathematics and physics in the second semester of 2007 to gain tutoring experience.
4,capacity 改成abilities 比较好
5,Be able to master the language C and assembly language programming
我给你改的是
Good command in language C and Assembling Language Programming
6,Have a certain understanding of personal computer,including the structure and the use of PC.
我给你改的是
Familiar with the operation and stucture of PC
7,Be able to use Multisim,matlab,such circuit simulation software
我给你改的是
Skilled in the operation of circuit simulation softwars such as Multisim,Matlab,etc.
8,个人性格可以多加一些好听的,我给你改的是
Personal Charactors:Honest,optimistic,outgoing,hard-working,self-motivated.Meanwhile,Flexibility,fast learning skill and being able to work under pressure are my greatest capabilities.
最后给一些写简历的建议
把简历分为几个主要部分
personal information
姓名,年龄,联系方式,毕业学校,专业等
abilities and certificates
计算机证书,语言能力等,奖学金等
campus activities
在校参加的活动,社团,比赛等
working experience
实习,打工等社会经验
personal charactors
篇幅应该在一张a4纸之内,所以专业课可以不用先考虑,等其他都写完了,还有空的地方,把专业课再写上去,另外开一栏.
education
把毕业学校,专业,所学课程分到这栏里就好了.

我阅读过很多份简历
你的简历不够清晰明了
一般情况下，看到这类简历我都会直接过，不会往下看
建议你到网上（如中华英才网）找一个像样的模板，按照填写一下
至于内容，如果面试你的是中国人，不会仔细阅读你的英文简历，中文简历是一定要一起附上的
如果面试你的是外国人，他也不会过分计较你的措辞，因为他们可以理解英语不是你的母语...

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我阅读过很多份简历
你的简历不够清晰明了
一般情况下，看到这类简历我都会直接过，不会往下看
建议你到网上（如中华英才网）找一个像样的模板，按照填写一下
至于内容，如果面试你的是中国人，不会仔细阅读你的英文简历，中文简历是一定要一起附上的
如果面试你的是外国人，他也不会过分计较你的措辞，因为他们可以理解英语不是你的母语

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比较明显的几个问题：
1.major 是专业的意思，你列举是课程，用courses吧。
2.I have took part in.时态不一致，去掉have
3.I practice myself.要用过去式 practiced
4.capacity 用的不好改成 competence
你没必要写英文简历，你的英语水平去不成外企的，让中国人看了也暴露了你的英...

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比较明显的几个问题：
1.major 是专业的意思，你列举是课程，用courses吧。
2.I have took part in.时态不一致，去掉have
3.I practice myself.要用过去式 practiced
4.capacity 用的不好改成 competence
你没必要写英文简历，你的英语水平去不成外企的，让中国人看了也暴露了你的英语水平。

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major只要一个就好了
你说的是courses been taken
During the second semester of 2007,I have practiced myself as a mathematics and physics teacher.