求帮忙修改英语语法错误Dear Professor Haruko:I have read some of your lastest papers.And what made me interested in is the application of microbe.As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of biology.Most of Marine biological resources is wai

求帮忙修改英语语法错误Dear Professor Haruko:I have read some of your lastest papers.And what made me interested in is the application of microbe.As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of biology.Most of Marine biological resources is wai
求帮忙修改英语语法错误
Dear Professor Haruko:
I have read some of your lastest papers.And what made me interested in is the application of microbe.As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of biology.Most of Marine biological resources is waiting for human to develop.And it become more and more important ,range from the fermentation engineering to the genetic engineering.now it has become an important research subject.As you said,many diseases may also be ease or even treated by some marine microorganism.That's wor
th to devoting ourselves to do something about it.
Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is PanHui,born in SEP 17,1989,studied a 4-year underguaduate course at Heilongjiang University Of Traditional Chinese Medicine from SEP 1,2007 to July 10,2011,majoring in food science and engineering.During the university time,i was taking an active part in the extracurricular activities.As opening a shop to help poor student,a local newspaper had an interview with me.Besides,when the May 2008 Sichuan earthquake happened,i organized the first donation with The Red Cross as soon as i can.As a result,i got a badge of red cross.
I was eagerly wish that i can join your research group.Now I am studying at FUJI International Language institute in TOKYO.Would you please consider my application and tell me how can I be enrolled as your gruduate?Thank you very much for your kind assistance.I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

求帮忙修改英语语法错误Dear Professor Haruko:I have read some of your lastest papers.And what made me interested in is the application of microbe.As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of biology.Most of Marine biological resources is wai
Most of Marine biological resources is waiting for human to develop ：is 改成 are
And it become :becomes range from the ;ranging
That's worth to devoting ourselves to do something about it.:第一个to 去掉 do 变doing
As opening a shop to help poor student :For...students
I was eagerly wish :I'm eager to
tell me how can I be enrolled as your gruduate?:tell me how I can .graduate

Dear Professor Haruko, 冒号改为逗号好点
I have read some of your lastest papers. And what interested me is the application of microbe.对细菌的应用这部分非常感兴趣As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of life.大海...

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Dear Professor Haruko, 冒号改为逗号好点
I have read some of your lastest papers. And what interested me is the application of microbe.对细菌的应用这部分非常感兴趣As is known to all,the sea is the cradle of life.大海是生命的摇篮
把biology改掉比较好Most of marine biological resources are waiting for human to develop.And it becomes more and more important ,which ranges from the fermentation engineering to the genetic engineering.Now it has become an important research subject. As you said, many diseases may also be eased or even treated by some marine microorganism.ease应该用过去分词That's worth devoting ourselves to doing something about it.去掉to 表be worth dong sth
devote to中to是介词后接动词ing
Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Pan Hui.I was born on Sep 17th 1989.I studied a 4-year underguaduate course at Heilongjiang University of Traditional Chinese Medicine from Sep 1st,2007 to July 10th,2011,majoring in food science and engineering.During the university time,I took an active part in the extracurricular activities,such as running a shop to help poor students.用一般过去时即可而不是进行时。我积极参加业余活动，比如开店帮助困难学生，个人感觉可以用run a shop,student用复数.A local newspaper had an interview with me on it.就此事采访了我 加个on it感觉 更通顺Besides, when the May 2008 Sichuan earthquake happened, i organized the first donation with The Red Cross as soon as I can. As a result, I got a badge of red cross.
我正热切期盼加入您的研究小组 I am eagerly expecting that I can join your research group.Now I am studying at FUJI International Language Institute in TOKYO.Would you please consider my application and tell me how I can be enrolled as your gruduate? Thank you very much for your kind assistance. I am looking forward to receiving your reply.后面基本没什么了

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