We had great fun yesterday.We went to the zoo.We were happy.温州英语口语听力的说话、、大家帮我看下有没有错误的地方、、、 急 刚考完

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We had great fun yesterday.We went to the zoo.We were happy.温州英语口语听力的说话、、大家帮我看下有没有错误的地方、、、 急 刚考完

We had great fun yesterday.We went to the zoo.We were happy.温州英语口语听力的说话、、大家帮我看下有没有错误的地方、、、 急 刚考完
We had great fun yesterday.We went to the zoo.We were happy.
温州英语口语听力的说话、、大家帮我看下有没有错误的地方、、、 急 刚考完

We had great fun yesterday.We went to the zoo.We were happy.温州英语口语听力的说话、、大家帮我看下有没有错误的地方、、、 急 刚考完
没有任何语法错误啊,但是感觉有点重复了,因为前面你已经说了had great fun就是玩的愉快的意思,后面又来一句we were happy,显得有点重复了,最好可以去掉