求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good gu

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求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good gu

求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good gu
求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方
yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good guy who is really love you and makes you happy.

求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good gu
yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So forget all about me.I hope that you can find a good guy who really loves you and makes you happy.

其它的不用改,没什么语法错误,只要最后一句who is really love........改成who really loves就可以了,其它的译得比较好了,加油。

写的可以,各种语法用的都比较精确

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yea, i admit that i'm a bad guy and just like a little bird without feet(?你要表达什么意思什么意思) so, i thingk it will be better if you just forget all about me. i hope that you will find a good boy who really loves you and makes you happy.

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