哪儿错了 求改正In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciate their time by using the high technique,on the other hand,some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.[教师点评][句子错误] 句中不同单句之间

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哪儿错了 求改正In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciate their time by using the high technique,on the other hand,some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.[教师点评][句子错误] 句中不同单句之间

哪儿错了 求改正In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciate their time by using the high technique,on the other hand,some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.[教师点评][句子错误] 句中不同单句之间
哪儿错了 求改正
In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciate their time by using the high technique,on the other hand,some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.
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[句子错误] 句中不同单句之间需要添加连词.
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哪儿错了 求改正In modern life,on the one hand,some people appreciate their time by using the high technique,on the other hand,some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.[教师点评][句子错误] 句中不同单句之间
In modern life, on the one hand, some people appreciate their time by using the high technique
与on the other hand, some people prefer to enjoy fast-paced life to get things done.是两个完整的句子
所以这句话之间,需改变标点符号,
用分号,on不用大写 ;
如果用句号, 则on要大写On the other hand