英语翻译hello,everyone.I want to make friends with you .How about you.First,let me introduce myself to you.my english name is lance.I'm Nineteen-year-old.I am an outgoing boy.As you can see,this is what I,have short black hair and two black eyes

英语翻译hello,everyone.I want to make friends with you .How about you.First,let me introduce myself to you.my english name is lance.I'm Nineteen-year-old.I am an outgoing boy.As you can see,this is what I,have short black hair and two black eyes
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hello,everyone.I want to make friends with you .How about you.First,let me introduce myself to you.my english name is lance.I'm Nineteen-year-old.I am an outgoing boy.As you can see,this is what I,have short black hair and two black eyes．　Then let me talk about you can not see.I like to listening music and sing some popular songs,I also have a lot of favorite singers.Sometimes sing with friends,Sometimes one person singing.I also like watching movies,My favorite movie star is Leonardo,He is really handsome Gentleman And the acting is very good,he starred Titanic is really classic.I will be look at the Titanic 3D Film． He also has more than what movies are nice,I really love him.On outdoor activities I like climbing mountains,I really enjoy the closer to nature,I feel well.I like animals,I have a dog called lele,It is so cute,but it is so fat.Because I don't have brothers and sisters,so I treat it brother.I like to eat different kinds of food and vegetables,because I in Wuhan,so i love spicy food.this is what i.thsnk you
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英语翻译hello,everyone.I want to make friends with you .How about you.First,let me introduce myself to you.my english name is lance.I'm Nineteen-year-old.I am an outgoing boy.As you can see,this is what I,have short black hair and two black eyes
hello,everyone.I want to make friends with you .How about you.First,let me introduce myself to you.my English name is Lance.I'm Nineteen-year-old.I am an outgoing boy.As you can see,I have short black hair and two black eyes.
Then let me talk about what you can not see.I like listening to music and singing some popular songs,there are a lot of singers I love.Sometimes I sing with my friends,Sometimes by myself.I also like watching movies.My favorite movie star is Leonardo.He is really a handsome gentleman and his acting is very good.The movie Titanic that he starred is really classic.I will watch the Titanic 3D.He has also starred many other movies that are splendid,I really love him.As for outdoor activities,I like climbing mountains,I really enjoy closing to the nature,It makes me feel well.I like animals,I have a dog called Lele,It is so cute,but it is very fat.Because I don't have brothers and sisters,so I treat it as my brother.I like eatting different kinds of food and vegetables,because I'm in Wuhan,so i love spicy food.this is what my life is like.thank you
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